Sometimes I have days when I feel so down,
I try to smile, but all I can do is frown.
But you always bring me light in the dark of the night,
And I truly believe you when you say it’s all gonna be alright.
Some girls trust their best friends through thick and thin,
Girlfriends are there for each other no matter where they’ve been.
Others count on their families to always be their guide,
But when it comes to you I’d rather have you by my side.
Those hard times when everything seems to be going wrong,
Our time together feels so short and everything else feels so long…
But the way you care for and comfort me no matter what life brings
Makes me believe that we can make it through anything.
When my world feels like it’s falling apart,
You always know how to mend my heart.
When nothing anyone says or does can make me laugh,
I just lean on you 'cause baby you’re my better half.
Jen, I love the song you chose. I like how you made it your own and the words you chose to get your point across. Great job!
ReplyDeleteLol you showed me this song last year, and when i saw the title of your blog, it didn't surpise me that you picked this song x] I love your poem! It's very sweet and the placement of the lyrics make it flow very nicely.
ReplyDeleteJen, this poem was really good. I like your choice of song and the rhyming that you did. This poem was sweet and very nice. The way you put the lyrics was great, as well. Overall this was a very good piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteJen, I love your poem and song choice. It was very creative and well put together. The lyrics you chose fit great into the poem. You did a great job with this poem!
ReplyDeleteJen, this poem is SO sweet! I love how the lyrics from the song you picked really made the poem flow. Great job!
ReplyDeleteJennifer!!! You should write songs for Keith Urban, these words flow nicely and are better than the song itself.
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